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Writing essays can be tough. Imagine finishing your essay, proud of your arguments. But when you check the word count, you realize you need to cut it down by 30 percent. Yikes! Shortening an essay can seem daunting, but it doesn’t have to be. With the right approach, you can remove excess words, sentences, and paragraphs to create a clear, concise paper that is easier to read and understand. Learning how to write paper faster<\/a> can also help you become more efficient in structuring your thoughts and trimming unnecessary content from the start. This blog will show you how to shorten an essay effectively while maintaining your voice, ensuring your work is free of unnecessary fluff, and preserving your essay’s integral structure and strong arguments.

AI writing tools<\/a> like Conch can help you shorten your essay quickly and efficiently. This tool can help eliminate redundancies, improve organization, and enhance clarity to help you create a more concise and readable essay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

How to Shorten an Essay Without Losing Key Points<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
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When it comes to academic writing, clarity and focus<\/a> are king. Without clear writing, your readers will struggle to understand your ideas and won\u2019t be pleased. On top of that, any time you over-explain concepts or get lost in lengthy descriptions, you risk losing your audience\u2019s interest.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Distilling Clarity<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

As such, cutting unnecessary words from your writing is crucial to improving clarity and helping your reader better understand your ideas. The more concise your writing is, the easier for your reader to follow your train of thought. Cutting word count will help you eliminate redundant information, which can also detract from clarity and focus.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Strategies for Revising Essays to Reduce Word Count <\/h3>\n\n\n\n

There are four basic strategies. Which you employ can depend on how much you need to cut (though you\u2019ll generally find yourself using all of them somehow). <\/p>\n\n\n\n

1. Word by Word <\/h4>\n\n\n\n

For the easiest phase of the revision game, and especially if you\u2019re only over word count by, say, 5ish%, cut extraneous words, one by one. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Which words are extraneous below? Can you cut at least one, then do a celebration dance?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI couldn\u2019t believe that I would be stuck handling prom preparations.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

That\u2019s right: \u201cI couldn\u2019t believe <\/strong>that<\/s><\/strong> <\/strong>I would be stuck handling prom preparations.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

1 word! Let\u2019s dance\u2013<\/p>\n\n\n\n

But wait! Hold up! We found another.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI couldn\u2019t believe<\/em> that <\/s><\/em>I\u2019<\/em> woul<\/s><\/em>d be stuck handling prom preparations.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Did you know: contractions are actually cool in college essays?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

(Sssh: don\u2019t tell your English teacher. But seriously. They\u2019re fine.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n

2 words gone! Okay, do your Safety Dance, or the Macarena, or the Dab, or Gangnam Style, or Griddy, or\u2026 <\/s><\/p>\n\n\n\n

2. Phrase by Phrase<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

With phrase-by-phrase cuts, you want to watch for ways to tighten the flow and emphasize scene versus summary\u2014ways to improve your writing while dropping word count. When we say \u201cflow,\u201d we mean rhythm and pacing\u2014\u201ctrippingly on the tongue\u201d (thanks, Hamlet!). Your words should flow through the admission officer\u2019s mind, and if possible, make them forget they\u2019re reading. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Here\u2019s an example of stellar student writing. He had to cut some of it to make room for a salient paragraph on his favorite research project in AP history. He also had to turn to his brilliant hook paragraph for some cuts because space was limited (thanks, 650-word count!). <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Here\u2019s the original:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cIn the 55th minute, with the game deadlocked at zero, South African winger Siphiwe Tshabalala fired a rocket of a ball into the top corner of the net to score the first goal of the tournament. A reaction of shock in the crowd quickly turned to joy.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Spot any phrases that you could get rid of?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Here\u2019s what he did:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cIn the 55th minute, with the game deadlocked at zero, South African winger Siphiwe Tshabalala fired a rocket of a ball into the top corner of the net to score the first goal of the tournament. <\/em>A reaction of<\/s><\/em> shock <\/em>in the crowd<\/s><\/em> <\/em>quickly<\/s><\/em> turned to joy.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Which makes the writing better: Do you see how a super-short, pithy sentence at the close of a long, image-rich sentence works beautifully? Good call, student! He should celebrate those six words gone. And celebrate that he kept some cool, cinematic touches here, resonant details of a World Cup game that showcase his love of sports and travel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

But guess what? It\u2019s all in the eye of the beholder, i.e., the author, which means other students have looked at this example since and suggested other cuts. Thus proving the following: there\u2019s no one right way to cut, and many different methods work for individual contexts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

For example:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cIn the 55th minute, <\/em>with<\/s><\/em> the game deadlocked at zero, South African winger Siphiwe Tshabalala fired a rocket <\/em>of a ball<\/s><\/em> into the <\/em>top corner of the<\/s><\/em> net to score the first goal <\/em>of the tournament<\/s><\/em>. <\/em>A reaction of <\/s><\/em>shock <\/em>in the crowd<\/s><\/em> <\/em>quickly<\/s><\/em> turned to joy.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

So, if the student happened to be really desperate for cuts and had to reduce that opening hook to just the essentials, then here are 18 words\u2014gone! <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Need more? \u201cInto the net\u201d could go as well.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Prioritizing Relevance in Personal Essays<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

In other words, it all depends on the essay you are writing and what is essential to the cinematic portrait of you. Would the student be smarter to add more specifics in another paragraph about his history research paper, and limit the amount of storytelling he does about his visit to a World Cup game? <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Or is it better to render an immersive portrait of a World Cup game for the reader to illustrate the student\u2019s passion and hook the reader? Only you, the author, can make that kind of call.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

A key takeaway here:<\/strong> Notice how frequently prepositional phrases (like \u201cinto the top corner\u201d or \u201cof the net\u201d or \u201cof a ball\u201d) are expendable in favor of strong details, and how unnecessary adverbs (e.g. \u201cquickly\u201d) are easy cuts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

3. Line by Line<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Sometimes, you need to strike through an entire sentence, AKA an independent clause to make more significant cuts. (If you have no idea what we\u2019re talking about, now\u2019s the time to school yourself on independent clauses<\/a>, which can stand on their own as complete sentences. Your college professors will appreciate it.) <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Where do you see an independent clause that could go?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cWhen I started wearing a mask in public, at the very beginning of the pandemic when no one else was, most of the people that I knew at school were extremely supportive about my situation, but a few people did not understand. Some people snapped my mask straps or whispered and pointed as I walked by.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Hint:<\/strong> where is there repetition of an idea? Maybe a summary of something that\u2019s already shown with a great example?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cWhen I started wearing a mask in public, at the very beginning of the pandemic when no one else was, most of the people that I knew at school were extremely supportive about my situation, but <\/em>a few people did not understand.<\/s><\/em> <\/em>S<\/s><\/em>some people snapped my mask straps or whispered and pointed as I walked by.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cA few people did not understand\u201d is an independent clause that could go. Why? The example of the mask-snapping, whispering, pointing classmates does the job for us, and does it better. It\u2019s clear to the reader that they did not understand, not in the least. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

In other words, you can trust the reader to get the point if the details rock. But you saw some other places to cut, too, right? Everything else we suggest below is implied: that she\u2019s in public, that it\u2019s school<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cWhen I started wearing a mask<\/em> in public<\/s><\/em>, at the very beginning of the pandemic when no one else was, most <\/em>of the <\/s><\/em>people<\/em> that I knew at school <\/s><\/em>were extremely supportive<\/em> about my situation<\/s><\/em>, but <\/em>a few people did not understand. S<\/s><\/em>some people snapped my mask straps or whispered and pointed as I walked by.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Watch for independent clauses\/complete sentences that are effectively redundant.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

4. Idea by Idea<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Every example above is a version of this fourth strategy: cutting repeated content. One general principle to keep in mind for every revision is redundancy<\/a>. Where do you use different words, a single word, a phrase, or a sentence, to restate an idea that\u2019s already said?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

What if you\u2019d written all this in the fever of an early draft? (Which, btw, is fine\u2014that\u2019s what early drafts are for.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI couldn\u2019t believe that I would be stuck handling prom preparations all by myself, solo, and without anyone to rely on.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u2026 pretty sure you got it the first time, right?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

How about instead<\/strong> <\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI couldn\u2019t believe<\/em> that <\/s><\/em>I\u2019<\/em> woul<\/s><\/em>d be stuck handling prom preparations <\/em>all by myself,<\/s><\/em> solo<\/em>, and without anyone to rely on<\/s><\/em>.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Cutting and the Art of Replacement<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

When professionals cut, they rewrite, too. They find new, pithier words, phrases, and sentences to say it shorter, which is what admission officers want: more Hemingway, less Herman Melville. So this is a core skill you will use to drop word count effectively.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Original:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cOne doctor’s appointment for my semi-annual thyroid check would lead to me being told that I would have to take daily medicine.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

New:<\/strong> <\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cOne doctor’s appointment for my semi-annual thyroid check would <\/em>lead to me being told that<\/s><\/em> reveal I would have to take daily medicine.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

The student found one word to do the work of several.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Several students have since suggested other cuts, which is cool because another pair of eyes can often see what we can\u2019t. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cOne <\/em>doctor’s <\/s><\/em>appointment for my <\/em>semi-annual <\/s><\/em>thyroid check would <\/em>lead to me being told that<\/s><\/em> reveal I\u2019<\/em>woul<\/s><\/em>d have to take daily medicine.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Again, make it a game. You have many options to explore.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

8 Tricks to Reduce Your Word Count in Academic Writing<\/h3>\n\n\n\n

Here are key tips enough to trim the excess and make your essay sharper and more readable<\/a>. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

1. Eliminate Redundant Words and Phrases<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Redundancy is like overpacking for a trip. You\u2019re carrying things you don\u2019t need.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Words like \u201cbasically,\u201d \u201cactually,\u201d or \u201cin order to\u201d can often be chopped without any harm to your meaning. For example, instead of writing: \u201cIn order to complete the project, the team worked hard,\u201d you can simply say, \u201cTo complete the project, the team worked hard.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

One small change, and you\u2019re already saving words. Did you notice that I gave the example of replacing \u201cIn order to\u201d with \u201cTo\u201d twice in this article? That\u2019s redundancy right there!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Another common culprit is the word that. While it\u2019s useful sometimes, it\u2019s often unnecessary.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can write: \u201cI believe that this is true\u201d as \u201cI believe this is true\u201d and it won\u2019t hurt anyone. Similarly, any word or phrase that feels redundant has to go. But redundancy is also about repeated ideas. If you\u2019ve explained something once, don\u2019t explain it again unless it adds fresh insight. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Let\u2019s say your essay is about space exploration, and you\u2019ve already mentioned the challenges of zero gravity. You don\u2019t need to revisit it every time you talk about astronaut training. To find out if a phrase or idea feels repetitive or overstuffed, reading your essay out loud helps a lot. Not to mention this trick will also point out other issues in the essay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

2. Combine Short Sentences<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

While short sentences are great for clarity, too many can bloat your word count.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Merging related sentences<\/a> can help reduce such sentences and the word count, as a result.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

For example, instead of writing: \u201cThe experiment was a success. It showed that the hypothesis was correct,\u201d you could say: \u201cThe successful experiment confirmed the hypothesis.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

See what happened there? Two sentences became one, and the message stayed intact.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can also merge sentences with overlapping ideas. For instance: \u201cThe book was interesting. It had a lot of historical details.\u201d <\/em>can become: \u201cThe book was interesting for its historical details.\u201d<\/em> Again, fewer words, same point.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

And don\u2019t worry about losing your voice or style. Combining just creates smooth, flowing sentences while keeping your essay lean.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

3. Remove Unnecessary Adjectives and Adverbs<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Adjectives and adverbs also often bloat your sentences without adding real value. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

And when you\u2019re trying to cut down on word count, they can be the easiest words to let go.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Take this sentence: \u201cThe absolutely incredible idea was extremely well-received.\u201d It\u2019s packed with extra fluff that doesn\u2019t make the idea sound better. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

You can trim it to:<\/strong> \u201cThe idea was well-received,\u201d and you\u2019ve made the sentence less wordy and punchier. Good nouns and verbs don\u2019t need modifiers to do their job. For example, instead of saying, \u201cShe ran very quickly,\u201d you could just say, \u201cShe sprinted.\u201d <\/p>\n\n\n\n

But hey, not all adjectives are your enemies. Only the ones that overshadow everything else need to go. Subtle ones can stay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

4. Trim Excessive Explanations<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Sometimes, when we really want to make a point, we go overboard with examples, definitions, or details. Ironically, this can weaken our argument instead of strengthening it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cClimate change is a global issue that affects ecosystems, wildlife, and human life, causing rising sea levels, extreme weather, and unpredictable temperatures.\u201d <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Sure, this is detailed, but it\u2019s also a mouthful. Instead, look at this: <\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cClimate change affects ecosystems, wildlife, and human life through rising sea levels and extreme weather.\u201d <\/p>\n\n\n\n

It\u2019s still informative, but now it\u2019s concise. Simply trust your reader. They don\u2019t need you to explain every little detail. Adding too much explanation is like asking, \u201cHow to make your essay longer?\u201d, which is definitely not what we\u2019re doing here!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

5. Replace Long Phrases With Shorter Alternatives<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Big, sprawling phrases can be hard to let go of because they make you sound eloquent. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

But at the same time, they can often weigh down your writing. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Some of them also need to go to meet that word count requirement. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Long Phrases<\/strong><\/td>Example Alternatives<\/strong><\/td><\/tr>
At this moment in time<\/td>Now<\/td><\/tr>
Due to the fact that<\/td>Because<\/td><\/tr>
In the event that<\/td>If<\/td><\/tr>
It is worth noting that<\/td>Note<\/td><\/tr>
Has the ability to<\/td>Can<\/td><\/tr>
In light of the fact that<\/td>Since<\/td><\/tr>
For the purpose of<\/td>For<\/td><\/tr>
In order to<\/td>To<\/td><\/tr>
A large number of<\/td>Many<\/td><\/tr>
By means of<\/td>By<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n

Add and compare the word count in both columns and see how big of a difference removing the phrases can make. Remember, the goal is clarity, not length. If you\u2019re tempted to stretch your sentences with long phrases, ask yourself, does it really add anything? If not, cut it. Otherwise, you\u2019re heading straight into \u201chow to make an essay longer\u201d territory, and we\u2019re here to avoid that.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

6. Just Really Cut Out Filler Words That Are Very Unnecessary<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Did you notice anything about this heading no 6? It\u2019s stuffed with filler words<\/a>. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Words like just, really, that, or very can sneakily bulk up your essay without adding any real value. They often don\u2019t change the meaning of a sentence. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Let\u2019s look at an example:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI am really excited about this new idea.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Cut the filler, and it becomes:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cI am excited about this idea.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

See, removing the fillers didn\u2019t take anything away. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Here\u2019s the thing, though. Filler words can be hard to spot because they hide themselves subtly. So use an AI essay writer<\/a> to help you identify filler words automatically. Otherwise, be ready for attentively reading the entire essay multiple times.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

7. Switch to Active Voice<\/h4>\n\n\n\n

When considering how to shorten an essay, pay attention to the voice you\u2019re writing in. Passive voice weighs down your writing with extra words. Active voice creates clearer, more concise sentences while making your writing more engaging.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Spot passive voice in phrases like:<\/p>\n\n\n\n